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 kowboy2477 
21-Jun-12 9:54 am
There is an entire side of me
You may never get to see
It's where is some of the best
Parts of me might be
Butits a side most never see

Part of it is it covered in ashes
And others covered in rust
It'll take some effort
And it'll take some trust

But if you don't get scared
then cut and run
You may just find
that side of me can be
I hella lot of fun

So if you're willing
Go ahead and cut the wires
let's take a chance
And see what transpires
because you never know
what things can be
if you'll get to know
That side of me

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
21-Jun-12 9:56 am
Two thumbs and a big toe up!!!!

 

 

 
 
 kowboy2477 
21-Jun-12 2:13 pm
Ty

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
21-Jun-12 2:14 pm
Very nice, I liked it :)

 

 

 
 
 james85 
21-Jun-12 2:59 pm
Great job!

 

 

 
 
 Acire 
23-Jun-12 1:40 am
That was really nice

 

 

 
 
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