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Lets make a story (by chunkymonkey67)

 chunkymonkey67 
15-Jul-13 11:21 pm
I'll start the first sentence and feel free to add on,I was walkin to the shop when I notices a car with blacked out windows slow down as it passed me by.

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
15-Jul-13 11:30 pm
@chunkymonkey67: I thought it odd, for this neighborhood.

 

 

 
 
 Rob65 
15-Jul-13 11:42 pm
In the big city I'd be worried.

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
15-Jul-13 11:45 pm
@chunkymonkey67: No one around here, could possibly afford a car like that. And why did it slow down. ?Who is it? What are they looking for? Are they looking at me?

 

 

 
 
 chunkymonkey67 
15-Jul-13 11:47 pm
When I got to the shop I noticed that the car had pulled up across the street and started to get worried

 

 

 
 
 nikky1984 (6)    (40 / F-M / England)
15-Jul-13 11:50 pm
So I ran in the shop got my phone out ready waiting for something ti happen

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
15-Jul-13 11:58 pm
A tall man, nicely dressed got out of the passenge side & open the back door of the car.....

 

 

 
 
 nikky1984 (6)    (40 / F-M / England)
16-Jul-13 12:00 am
And out poped my girlfriend

 

 

 
 
 Ladybug1223 
16-Jul-13 12:04 am
I watch as two very pretty legs stepped out from back of the car

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
16-Jul-13 12:07 am
@Ladybug1223: Her clothes were designer, her hair & make up, impecable..

 

 

 
 
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