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Am I worthy of your love? (by Rambler)

 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 10:51 pm
@Sunflower1973: thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!

 

 

 
 
 rainbowchick32 
7-Jul-13 11:41 pm
I thought was a very beautiful poem u have a special gift.

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 11:51 pm
@rainbowchick32: thanks.

 

 

 
 
 rainbowchick32 
7-Jul-13 11:53 pm
Yw

 

 

 
 
 Nhina (9)   (46 / F-MF / Philippines)
8-Jul-13 1:19 am
@Rambler:

"I am just a man"

"I think the answer must be yes. I must never show you what I feel for you. I must never allow to escape my lips, the words that I am dieing to say to you. I must break my onw heart to protect yours. Truly, this is the best way that I can show you what I can never say. That I love you."

This piece of yours is so sad yet moving.

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
8-Jul-13 1:23 am
@Nhina: thanks

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
8-Jul-13 1:32 am

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
8-Jul-13 1:49 am
@mrb89: lol, glad you liked it

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
8-Jul-13 1:53 am
I ran outta nice words to say lol :girlhahs: but yes I did indeed like it

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
8-Jul-13 1:58 am
@mrb89: I am glad. I can't reread my work or I will just pick it apart. I always find something I should have said differently or that I feel I could have elaborated on more, or should have omitted.

 

 

 
 
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