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Am I worthy of your love? (by Rambler)

 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 9:01 pm
I feel these emotions for you. I feel this inexplicable pull towards you. Your face dominates my thoughts. Your eyes, my mind's eye. I long to reach out and touch you. My only desire is to wrap my arms around you and shower you with soft kisses.

But how can I be worthy of the love of an angel such as yourself? I am after all, but a man. I am not a bad man, not a good man. I am just a man.

Surely, I will fall short of deserving your affection. Certainly, I will hurt you along the way. After all, I am just a man.

I can't bare the thought of causing you pain. I would rather die than be the cause of a single tear to your eyes.

I could never deserve to be loved by you. I could never be great enough a man to give you all that you deserve, much less everything I want to give you.

So am I worthy of a love such as yours? The honest answer must surely be no. I am not worthy of your love. I am not now, nor will I ever be worthy to love a creature as magnificent as you.

So should I even try? Should I even tell you of the well of emotion springing up inside of me whenever I see your face? Should I subject you to the tortures of the love of a man such as I? If I truly love you, would it not be best if I keep these feelings to myself? Locked away in the recesses of my heart? Shouldn't I bury my love for you, never to see the light of day? If I love you, should I not protect you from myself? Should I not keep you away from my dark, haunted heart?

I think the answer must be yes. I must never show you what I feel for you. I must never allow to escape my lips, the words that I am dieing to say to you. I must break my onw heart to protect yours. Truly, this is the best way that I can show you what I can never say. That I love you.

 

 

 
 
 lace38 
7-Jul-13 9:08 pm
That made me cry

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 9:11 pm
@lace38: aw, I'm sorry lace

 

 

 
 
 lace38 
7-Jul-13 9:14 pm
@lace38: aw, I'm sorry lace
its a very emotional poem..

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 9:16 pm
@lace38: most of my writing is emotional. I love writing that pulls on the soul. Same with with music. I want to feel it, not just read it or hear it.

 

 

 
 
 lace38 
7-Jul-13 9:18 pm
@lace38: most of my writing is emotional. I love writing that pulls on the soul. Same with with music. I want to feel it, not just read it or hear it.
im the same way

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 9:21 pm
@lace38:

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
7-Jul-13 10:15 pm
OH WOW!!! That made me cry. Absolutely beautiful...every girl dreams of feelings such as these

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 10:16 pm
@Briteeyes: thanks!

 

 

 
 
 Sunflower1973 (0)    (51 / F-M / Tennessee)
7-Jul-13 10:25 pm
@Rambler: i loved it . loved the raw emotions

 

 

 
 
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