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Every time you walk by (by unwound)

 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
18-Jun-12 3:13 am
I duck my head run for cover,once were friends & lovers,leaving you wondering why I never smile,why I turn from you ,with a cold shoulder. Giving me reasons that don't make sense building a wall ,building a fence. While saying one thing and do the other. When I see you I dare not say,I have no words,they go astray,everytime you walk by.

 

 

 
 
 rachelle04 (1)    (40 / F-F / Texas)
18-Jun-12 3:18 am
That is so true and love it

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Jun-12 1:17 am
@rachelle04:yes it is true,thanks for the like

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
20-Jun-12 1:23 am
Wow...i missed this one sir...love it!

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Jun-12 12:14 pm
@JLaDawn: thanks

 

 

 
 
 alysia92 
20-Jun-12 2:16 pm
Really good

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
20-Jun-12 6:35 pm
@alysia92: thanks

 

 

 
 
 james85 
20-Jun-12 7:01 pm
Very good, well done!

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
20-Jun-12 7:13 pm
Its really good.

 

 

 
 
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