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Where are you, my love? (by Rambler)

 Rambler 
24-Jun-13 11:47 pm
Where are you? Why did you leave me?
Did I not love you enough? Did I not think of you from the time I woke to the time I fell asleep? Didn't I tell you everyday how much you meant to me? Didn't I try to be your everything? So why have you left me?
You promised me we would be forever. I still remember the day we wed. I remember your face shining so beautifully. I remember holding your hand as you gave birth to our child. I remember how happy we were, how in love we were. I remember all of the nights we held each other and got lost in each other's eyes. Why my dear, sweet love did you leave me?
I will never again feel your sweet kisses on my lips, I will never again feel the warmth of your body pressed against mine. Never again will I hear the angelic sound of your voice calling me. Why, why did you leave?
I feel empty inside without you. I feel lost, like a ship without a compass. I feel numb to life. I have no desire to live, to see the sun rise. Why, oh love of my life did you have to leave?
Still, I visit you every day. I talk to you, though you no longer hear me. My heart died the day I watched you being laid to rest. And I dream of the day I will join you.

 

 

 
 
 justbmyself (22)   (40 / F-MF / Zambia)
24-Jun-13 11:58 pm
@Rambler: so sad but good combination of words

 

 



Last edited by justbmyself; 24-Jun-13 11:58 pm.
 
 
 Rambler 
24-Jun-13 11:59 pm
@justbmyself: thanks

 

 

 
 
 hornyoldgoat 
25-Jun-13 12:38 am
@Rambler: my condolences for your loss, my friend

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
25-Jun-13 12:41 am
@hornyoldgoat: I haven't lost anyone recently, bro. It was a little creative writing piece. But thanks

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
25-Jun-13 12:42 am
Very impressive

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
25-Jun-13 12:43 am
@Briteeyes: Thanks, Brite!

 

 

 
 
 Nhina (9)   (46 / F-MF / Philippines)
25-Jun-13 12:47 am
@hornyoldgoat: I haven't lost anyone recently, bro. It was a little creative writing piece. But thanks
Your writing is so strong I really thought you lost someone very dear to you too. You are very creative.

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
25-Jun-13 12:50 am
@Nhina: Thanks. I can tap into my emotions very easily. Writing is one of the ways I express them. Talking about my emotions is much harder for me.

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
25-Jun-13 12:52 am
@Nhina: Thanks. I can tap into my emotions very easily. Writing is one of the ways I express them. Talking about my emotions is much harder for me.
Really?

 

 

 
 
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