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Loving you is a crime (by cgdean77)

 cgdean77 
15-Jun-13 12:01 am
If loveing you is a crime in prison me the love love I have for you is hevenly so lock me up and throw away the key
A love so strong it can't be wrong one I've been waiting on for so long
A love so true I hold so dear brings me a lot of cheers but with that comes a lot of feers
A heart so gentle. And so kind I think the lord everyday you are mine
If loving you is a crime put me on trail lock me up in reckensile
unto you my guilty plead I will love you for eternity
god made me for you and you for me

 

 

 
 
 linda4u 
15-Jun-13 12:07 am
Thats very nice thanks 4 sharing with every1

 

 

 
 
 Poeticjustice65 
15-Jun-13 12:55 am
@cgdean77: very nice

 

 

 
 
 cgdean77 
15-Jun-13 1:01 am
Think. You'll. It gose out to one special lady. She knows who she is

 

 

 
 
 WalkSoftly1 
15-Jun-13 1:16 am
Think. You'll. It gose out to one special lady. She knows who she is
Brother I think we all know lol

 

 

 
 
 cgdean77 
15-Jun-13 1:18 am
That's cool I want ppl to no

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
15-Jun-13 1:40 am
Well Damn, I got left out again?? Nobody told me who it is...I'm just kidding just kidding. Very beautiful poem darlin. Thank you

 

 

 
 
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