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The coin (by james85)
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is my latest poem its called the coin:
two sides of a coin, thats how my life is now, one side is happy saying
life is awesome, that ive made so many friends, the other is sad knowing
that i will always be a failure as a human, my life will never be
complete, ive lost all hopes, dreams and have nothing to live for, which
one will win? At the moment, my sadness is victorious. I want my
happiness now do i deserve it? No... my two things seem so far away,
unattaniable to me. When will my joy come? i'll never know
is my latest poem its called the coin:
two sides of a coin, thats how my life is now, one side is happy saying
life is awesome, that ive made so many friends, the other is sad knowing
that i will always be a failure as a human, my life will never be
complete, ive lost all hopes, dreams and have nothing to live for, which
one will win? At the moment, my sadness is victorious. I want my
happiness now do i deserve it? No... my two things seem so far away,
unattaniable to me. When will my joy come? i'll never know
Last edited by james85; 27-May-13 10:42 am.
Great job my awesome gold! As i said i'll always be ur back up. Go go go!
@james85: wooowww!! bravooo!:-D thats very nice james! ur a good poet! and u will WIN ur happiness coz u deserve it sweet james!:-))
That poem was nice. It is exactly how I feel. U r a true poet and a very good 1 at that. Keep up with them I enjoy reading them James85 and thank you 4 sharing it with all of us
awe. a good poem buddy. I just wish you'd see that you're not all those bad things, you're so much more and so much better then that! But I know that the negative thoughts can be overwhelming sometimes, keep your chin up. Your life will get BETTER!
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