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Wall (by HonestAndCaring65)

 HonestAndCaring65 
2-May-13 1:25 am
My heart had a wall for many years.
Because of all the painful tears.
But when we talk you make me smile.
Something my heart hasn't felt in awhile.
I don't let anyone in because of years of pain.
And tons of tears that fell like rain.
I keep my thoughts and feelings inside my wall.
Because I don't want the pieces of my heart to fall.
I'm happy on my own but love I do miss.
The cuddling the loving the sharing of the special kiss.
So my wall will stay till I know it's real.
And hopefully you understand how I truly feel

 

 

 
 
 snoopy19 
2-May-13 1:40 am
Did you write that?

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
2-May-13 1:50 am
That is very good

 

 

 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
2-May-13 1:50 am
@snoopy19: yes I'm rusty been years since I've written :-)

 

 

 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
2-May-13 1:51 am
@Briteeyes: Thank you :-)

 

 

 
 
 MikeN2012 
2-May-13 1:55 am
@HonestAndCaring65: its a very good peice hun :) and ive felt the very same way for yrs but im much happier cuz all my friends and new friends make me happy and smile, wish the best of luck to you and hope ur tears have dryed hun, and if ya need a good friend im always here, im truely turning my life around and im happy that i am. Take care :)

 

 



Last edited by MikeN2012; 2-May-13 1:57 am.
 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
2-May-13 1:59 am
@MikeN2012: thank you and my tears dried a few years ago I'm very happy just it says it's real hard to let someone in but I'm happy I love life and enjoy it :-)

 

 

 
 
 Hawkeye58 (35)    (65 / M-F / Arizona)
2-May-13 2:05 am
@HonestAndCaring65: great poem.

 

 

 
 
 snoopy19 
2-May-13 2:05 am
Its very good. i know exactly how you are feeling from reading it. its not like the people who think they are photographers because they can take black and white pictures of their lawn furniture. you have talent

 

 

 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
2-May-13 2:11 am
@snoopy19: aww thank you I just need to write more I use to all the time won s contest here s few years ago I loved writing :-)

 

 

 
 
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