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I hurt... (by JLaDawn1974)

 InYourWetDreams 
28-Apr-13 5:44 pm
Its good

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn1974 
28-Apr-13 5:49 pm
@Sammy2: will do! Thanks for checking it out!

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
28-Apr-13 5:52 pm
Its good do submit it

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
28-Apr-13 10:51 pm
It's sad, and in a kind of wistful and deep way it has a longing to it for what you're trying to say to not just be heard, but to be understood and to be accepted and not ignored.

 

 



Last edited by mrb89; 28-Apr-13 10:52 pm.
 
 
 JLaDawn1974 
28-Apr-13 10:59 pm
It's sad, and in a kind of wistful and deep way it has a longing to it for what you're trying to say to not just be heard, but to be understood and to be accepted and not ignored.
THATs what I wanted to read....how you felt reading it....I wanna know what the women reading it will get....if it should be in that particular book thanks Meg! Thanks penny and Jessi too!

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
29-Apr-13 9:26 pm
@JLaDawn1974: yes, sumit it. I regret I never sumitted any of mine. Funny how some people are shocked when they learn something NEW about you. Like how fri..ing smart we really are! Go for it, don't " dummy down" to make others happy. Go for it! :)

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn (11)   (50 / F-M / Oklahoma)
17-Jun-14 9:23 pm
It was published

 

 

 
 
 Lionface (9)    (63 / M-F / Louisiana)
17-Jun-14 10:21 pm
Very awesome writing, persue that ability, you have a talent. It will come to full bloom in time.

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
17-Jun-14 11:07 pm
:-) Bravo. Congradulations. Don't stop writing.... Ever.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
18-Jun-14 1:44 am
It was published
awesome!

 

 

 
 
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