Thread: I hurt... - Dating.mobi

I hurt... (by JLaDawn1974)

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JLaDawn1974
28-Apr-13 12:58 am

I kept it quiet
I didn't tell
Why must I momma
Why can't they know

I hurt
Momma do you hear me
I hurt

Why is his good name important
Now mine is dicarded
I want to be loved too
I want to love you

I hurt
Momma do you hear me
I hurt

His lies kill you
My truth is covered
His evil grew
My innocence died

I hurt
Momma do you hear me
I hurt

Why does his hurtful words~
Reach so deep
Why do my healing deeds-
Never take root

I hurt
Momma do you hear me
I hurt

You give
He takes
I give
He takes

You hurt too
Momma do you hear me
You hurt too

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xSinneDx (21)

(43 / M-F / Arizona)
28-Apr-13 1:02 am

Umm kinda speechless on this one

3.

jimmybbbbb (19)

(47 / M-F / Georgia)
28-Apr-13 1:02 am

I totally didn't get it.But I think mama heard you..lol

4.

xSinneDx (21)

(43 / M-F / Arizona)
28-Apr-13 1:06 am

@jimmybbbbb: abusive relationship for ma an kid

5.

kent660 (2)

(54 / M-F / Missouri)
28-Apr-13 1:14 am

My step dad tried that. i introduced him to louis slugger. he was a coward

6.

REMIXX
28-Apr-13 1:44 am

Wow...that's deep

7.

Zilya777
28-Apr-13 2:22 am

I GOT YOU. Find women, who will hear you. She may never. It's not you. IT'S HIS CRIME, HER FEAR.... NOT YOUR SHAME.YOUR NOT TO BLAME. You can find me.

8.

JLaDawn1974
28-Apr-13 2:57 am

Thanks

9.

JLaDawn1974
28-Apr-13 4:22 pm

I wld appreciate any genuine feedback here. I am thinking of submitting this for publication in a piece of DVIS literature and no one has ever seen my poetry but y'all. Be honest pls.

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Sammy2
28-Apr-13 5:41 pm

Its good Jladawn:) Submit it-let me know how it goes?:)

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