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Eyes of Enchantment (by LaDawn1974)

 LaDawn1974 
3-Jun-12 3:51 am
I looked once at a world I didn't know through they eyes of a child I never got to be-Life was clean and without the compromises that have diminished me-It held wonders that my spirit yearned to explore untethered-And I wept at the brightnes of it's beauty-I live for the day I find the road that leads me back to the place I never knew!

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
3-Jun-12 5:08 am
:). 2 Thumbs up Dawn.

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
3-Jun-12 5:10 am
@Rainbowbutterfly: Thanx so much!

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
3-Jun-12 5:32 am
You're welcome. I wish i could write one someday :)

 

 

 
 
 AnnieFunk 
3-Jun-12 5:42 am
@LaDawn1974: that is beautiful!!!

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
3-Jun-12 1:38 pm
@AnnieFunk: thanx!

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
3-Jun-12 2:58 pm
I love it its beautiful.

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
3-Jun-12 3:12 pm
@brats52005: thanx

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
3-Jun-12 5:43 pm
@LaDawn1974: awesome inspiring,keep it up:-)

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
3-Jun-12 8:48 pm
@unwound: thank you!

 

 

 
 
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