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Rich Stuff, murder mystery. (by Hawkeye58)

 Hawkeye58 (35)    (65 / M-F / Arizona)
22-Mar-13 5:14 am
"The town's richest man was killed late last night in a shocking murder," the reporter exclaimed from the television across the room. "Chief Graham tells us that the police are carefully investigating everything and everyone, but they have no lead suspect yet."
Chief Graham let out a sigh as he looked out the window at the reporter and the large crowd still gathered outside. "Isn't there anything better to do in this town than hang around a crime scene all day?"
"No sir," answered Detective Jefferson. "Just the bowling alley, but it's really lame."
"My nephew runs the bowling alley."
"That's right, sir! And what a lovely bowling alley it is! Fantastic...pins."
"Will you just go over the facts with me one more time, detective?"
"Well, we found Mr. Hampton's body in the deep freezer after the mailman, Chuck, called us this morning to report his suspicion that something was wrong. Normally a frozen body would be good news for us. I mean, not GOOD news, may he rest in peace! Not that I'm not happy to finally have a good case to work on! I love my job and all..."
"Get on with it Jefferson."
"I just mean I'd think a frozen body would be helpful, since freezing preserves the body and the evidence so well. But unfortunately we just can't seem to find any evidence here. He appears to have been hit in the head with a blunt object, but other than that, there's not much we can tell. We've checked the house for clues, but nothing appears to be out of place. Whoever did this was careful. We've interviewed all the people that seem to have any contact with him, his son Don, his daughter Jessica, and of course, Chuck the mailman."
"I know it's been a long day and we'd all like to go home and get some rest, but I feel like we're missing something. I want to talk to everyone one more time," Chief Graham said.

"My dad has more money than anyone in this stupid town! Anyone could have a motive to kill him, surely you don't think I did it!" said Don Hampton with a look of anger and annoyance. "My dad and I got along fine! When I came over for dinner last month he told me he was proud of me for starting my own business just like he did."
"Didn't you start your business with a huge loan that he gave you?"
"Well, yeah. But that doesn't mean it wasn't hard!"
"Did you come over often to see him?" asked detective Jefferson.
"Yeah, every couple of weeks or so. Maybe once a month. A couple of times a year. Hey, we'd see each other more often, but you know what a hermit he is. He never leaves the house, so I was the one who had to make all the effort. If you ask me, I deserve a son-of-the-year award!"

"I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE HE'S GONE!" wailed Jessica Hampton through one of her fits of tears which only seemed to come while she was being questioned. "HE MEANT SO MUCH TO ME!"
"When was the last time you saw your father?"
"Well, I haven't seen him in a while. But I just talked to him on the phone last Saturday."
"And he didn't mention anything about being murdered soon?" Jefferson asked.
Chief Graham sighed. "Great work, Detective."
"Thanks chief!"
"Um, no. He sounded fine," Jessica continued. "Look, I'm sure you're thinking I had a motive to kill my father, since I'll probably inherit a lot of money now, but I bet Don will inherit the same amount as me! Plus Don owes - or owed - dad a bunch of money that he borrowed to start his business. So he has a bigger motive than me! HE should be your suspect!"

"Wow, the love in this family is amazing. Let's see what the mailman has to say."

"I'm used to his mail piling up in the mailbox, since he doesn't like to leave his house, but every now and then I'll have a package for him. Since he does all his shopping online, he's always eager to get his packages, so when I have one he always answers the door!" Chuck insisted. "I know it's not much to go on, but when he didn't come to the door this morning, I just had a really bad feeling that something was wrong."
"Have you noticed anything else lately? Any other suspicious activity?"
"No, not that I can think of. Sorry"

The chief sat down with a sigh. "This is just great. We have a reclusive victim who hardly ever makes contact with anyone, no clues, plenty of motives, no witnesses, and a lousy detective."
"Sounds tough, chief!"
"It is, Jefferson. It is."
The chief was just going launch into a new stream of complaints, when a thought occurred to him. He stood up suddenly. "Wait a minute! This may not hold up in court, but I sure know who we should be looking into!"
"You shouldn't end your sentences with a preposition, chief."
"Jefferson, I will literally kick you in the head."
"Sorry chief."
"Someone said something very revealing. I have a hunch that I may just be wrapping up this case sooner than I thought!"

Who accidentally alerted Chief Graham to aim the investigation in their direction?

 

 



Last edited by Hawkeye58; 22-Mar-13 5:16 am.
 
 
 yesu81 
22-Mar-13 5:28 am
Detective Jefferson..bowling pin?

 

 

 
 
 Sammy2 
22-Mar-13 5:31 am
Jessica?

 

 

 
 
 MissJessica86 (7)   (38 / F-M / New York)
22-Mar-13 5:31 am
The mailman? He's there all the time.

 

 

 
 
 Hawkeye58 (35)    (65 / M-F / Arizona)
22-Mar-13 5:35 am
I'll post the answer to this one tomorrow night about 7pm eastern time.

 

 

 
 
 Wiccangoddess (10)    (40 / F-M / New Jersey)
22-Mar-13 5:37 am
The old man fell in didn't he. N he ordered something bc he knew the mail man would get suspicious.

 

 

 
 
 Mia113 
22-Mar-13 5:40 am
I agree w/Wiccangoddess. I think it was an accident. But I'm groaning since we won't know the answer until tommorrow.

 

 

 
 
 Hawkeye58 (35)    (65 / M-F / Arizona)
22-Mar-13 6:04 am
sorry guys, but I wanna give a bunch of people a crack at this one. I promise I will post the answer early tomorrow night. and BTW, nobody is right so far. lol.

 

 

 
 
 princessj (12)    (31 / F-MF / Nigeria)
22-Mar-13 9:49 am
@Hawkeye58:
i think the reporter killed him and gave himself away with the comment
*the police are carefully investigating everything and EVERYONE* thereby alarting the chief to aim the investigation his way.

 

 



Last edited by princessj; 22-Mar-13 9:53 am.
 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
22-Mar-13 11:36 am
I loved reading this crime story hawkeye. Very provocative and the details are intriguing. Jessica definitely raised my suspicion. If she rarely spoke to her father or saw him, what was the Saturday call regarding? And she was a little too eager to pass blame on her brother.

 

 

 
 
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