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Inside Out (by Sammy2)

 Sammy2 
13-Feb-13 5:33 am
What happened that night changed me and what Im about... It gutted my soul from the inside out. So tough and proud I used to be...Until your death took that part of me. Life looks different from the inside out...fills your head and heart with doubt. The me I thought I was inside, has found in fear a place to hide. Inside out, thats how I feel...please be patient while I heal. :)

 

 

 
 
 quin100 
13-Feb-13 5:35 am
Wow!

 

 

 
 
 rob6594 
13-Feb-13 5:42 am
@Sammy2: man That was so heart felt it choked me up... You still ok dear?

 

 

 
 
 princessj (12)    (31 / F-MF / Nigeria)
13-Feb-13 5:52 am
it most still hurt a lot if you feel this way,just hang on and be strong.

 

 

 
 
 Sammy2 
13-Feb-13 5:58 am
:)Thanks yall-honestly I was thinkin bout Mystic Jade too-I just wrote this out tonight because its why I am who I am and I want potential partners to know that. It is amazing to me that six yrs has passed since my brother was killed, and I am so grateful that the pain has ebbed away to what it is now.. But it truly did change me-I am scared of silly things now lol

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
13-Feb-13 7:19 am
What happened that night changed me and what Im about... It gutted my soul from the inside out. So tough and proud I used to be...Until your death took that part of me. Life looks different from the inside out...fills your head and heart with doubt. The me I thought I was inside, has found in fear a place to hide. Inside out, thats how I feel...please be patient while I heal. :)
Great poem and the spiritual renewing aspect is nice :)

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
13-Feb-13 7:24 am
Wow that was wonderful.

 

 

 
 
 Sammy2 
14-Feb-13 4:50 am
:)Thanks yall:)

 

 

 
 
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