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Can You Let Me In...? (for crush) (by MysticJade)

 MysticJade 
8-Feb-13 2:53 am
(written for my crush)

I know, I might not seem your type. But here we are, can't you give it a try? If truth be told, I've been Lost most of my life... I'm the bird with the broken wing. All I'm looking for is Love... Aren't you looking for the same thing? I wouldn't hurt you... For I've been hurt before. Went to battle, but I lost that war. Now, I hope I ain't scaring you off... It's just, I don't want to get hurt no more. Knock knock, Can you let me in..? I've been standing awhile at this door. Only asking. Here I am, just wondering... Can you let me in..? It seems, if you can't hear me.. So I'm ask again, Can you let me in..? Listen, Love doesn't ask, it just happens. Here we are, So what's happening? Can you let me in..? Its cold out here. I'm freezing. I'm stabbed and I'm bleeding... But I know you can start my healing. I'm feeling for you, I'm thinking of you... A wise man once told me, "That's how it starts.."Can you let me in..? Can't you hear me...?I said, your Heart. Knock knock, Can you let me in..?

 

 

 
 
 RomeoCowboy1 
8-Feb-13 2:59 am

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
8-Feb-13 3:02 am
He is on his way

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
8-Feb-13 3:03 am
This was very sweet

 

 

 
 
 Jjd614 
8-Feb-13 3:11 am
hey scowboy what the hells wrong with you answer the door lol

 

 

 
 
 Sexycowboy94 
8-Feb-13 3:22 am
she's mine.

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
8-Feb-13 3:28 am
Bout time

 

 

 
 
 Jjd614 
8-Feb-13 3:35 am
hey brite did u see my msg please read it and help me make it right

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
8-Feb-13 7:19 am
@MysticJade: WoW, very beautiful and deeply touching.

 

 

 
 
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