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Only an Illusion (by Nzsweetie24)

 Nzsweetie24 (4)    (36 / F-M / New Zealand)
3-Feb-13 11:27 am
The right to love
The right to choose
The right to care
The right to speak
The right to cheek
And yet...
It is just an illusion!
We have the RIGHT to these things
But, with conditions, with limits.
We must...
Be careful who we love
Be careful what we choose
Be careful for whom we care
Be careful of what we speak
Be careful to whom we give cheek.
Because...
It is all just an illusion
One that can be taken away as easily as its given.
But interestingly, there are no conditions, no limits to that!

- Me -

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
3-Feb-13 11:51 am
true

 

 

 
 
 Harleydavid (0)    (60 / M-F / Wisconsin)
3-Feb-13 12:55 pm
Givers give an takers take to me as a giver i hate that they take from me if they wait i give you see.

 

 

 
 
 Nzsweetie24 (4)    (36 / F-M / New Zealand)
3-Feb-13 1:14 pm
@Harleydavid: Lol thats awesome

 

 

 
 
 Harleydavid (0)    (60 / M-F / Wisconsin)
3-Feb-13 1:21 pm
Thanks hope you have a great day!

 

 

 
 
 Harleydavid (0)    (60 / M-F / Wisconsin)
3-Feb-13 1:28 pm
time 2 log an sleep D out

 

 

 
 
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