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I'll wait for that fate. (by Suzieq205)

 Suzieq205 
13-Jan-13 4:55 am
I wrote this poem awhile ago, and its kind of cheesy, but it means something to me. *The the perfect guy, I think of you, I hope you take the time, to think of me to. One day we'll meet, I'll smile so sweet. You'll tell me I'm fine, I'll know it's not another line, I'll stroke your face, we'll bothe embrace. Just for that one day I wait, Hoping forever for that fate.

 

 

 
 
 hunter73 
13-Jan-13 5:03 am
@Suzieq205: that's a good poem :-):-)

 

 

 
 
 Suzieq205 
13-Jan-13 5:06 am
@hunter73: amature, but okay. Thanks!

 

 

 
 
 hunter73 
13-Jan-13 5:09 am
@Suzieq205: Practice makes perfect

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
13-Jan-13 5:10 am
I like your poem. Its very sweet.

 

 

 
 
 Anarchaic (3)    (37 / M-F / Texas)
13-Jan-13 5:12 am
Cute poem

 

 

 
 
 Suzieq205 
13-Jan-13 5:12 am
@brats52005: thanks. :)

 

 

 
 
 Suzieq205 
13-Jan-13 5:13 am
@hunter73: Yes, I've come a long ways since writing this piece.

 

 

 
 
 hunter73 
13-Jan-13 5:26 am
@Suzieq205: Well good job keep up the good work

 

 

 
 
 Classicalguy 
13-Jan-13 5:27 am
Does PERFECT guy mean that u will love him so much u will not see his faults, or that u will hold him 2 very high standard?

 

 

 
 
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