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Fall in love with a Crow Part 2 (by AwkwardPandaSneeze)

 AwkwardPandaSneeze (3)   (31 / F-M / Maine)
24-Dec-12 9:17 pm
Chapter 2
I passed out. I dreamt of the Raves eyes. The deep crimson as if someone had been murdered in the beauty the pureness if it kept me in deep sleep.
I heard my name being called over and over.. Ren... Ren... REN?! I woke startled seeing my friend bent over me.
"Oh my god Ren what happened?! Are you okay?!?!!" She looked at me with pleading eyes. I sat up slowly still in a daze.
"I-I'm alright" she helped me up as I looked up at the sky. Snow slowly falling on me. Where did it go? I thought to myself.
We continued our walk to school, our teacher came in and smiled . He was small and round with glasses always grinning, which kind of freaked me out. He was warm-hearted though.
"Class we have a new student" I looked to the door and saw a boy. He had dark black hair, I had seen black hair before but something about it was different. His face was very pale he wasn't smiling and his eyes... His eyes. His hair was blocking them I couldn't see anything. He had a grayish blackish hoodie on, with black skinny jeans and black converse shoes.
"Make him feel at home okay? " the teacher grinned." Oh by the way, boy, what's your name?" The boy stayed quiet for a couple of seconds before answering. "Zero."
After that I couldn't quite remember what happened. Zero sat in the back row away from everyone. After school had ended he just disappeared, he seemed in such a hurry.
I got home and but my bag down and headed for the bathroom. I slowly took off my shirt, undoing the buttons of my shirt I looked up at the mirror. I remember his black hair it was a bit long for a guy, it covered his eyes and was a bit over his shoulders. I took off my bra, skirt an the rest of my clothes as I got in the bath tub laying back a bit relaxing. I looked at my body and washed it gently.
I whispered to myself "Zero" and continued to bathe.

To be continued ...

 

 

 
 
 james85 
24-Dec-12 9:43 pm
wow ok this is cool i like it :D

 

 

 
 
 Rjd1012 
24-Dec-12 10:02 pm
Finish the story

 

 

 
 
 Mobifren (2)   (41 / F-MF / Philippines)
25-Dec-12 1:00 pm
interesting story.

 

 

 
 
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