Currently revising my college term paper, and in need of some help. My Comp. Teacher told me it's too informative and has too many theories and needs to be put into a personal reference. My paper is about the psychological advantages over Behaviorism and learned responces (Sigmund Frued) and honestly, i see no way to possibly make it into a personal account. Any ideas?

hmm.. Does it also tackles about interaction of individuals with each other?

@missCHIE: It does. In the paper i mention how interacting with peers also causes learned responces and how temporary or permanent changes in behavior can be determined by interaction.

Have you tryed toook at it under youre own experiounses of interacting and behavior changes.

@Fallguy56010: i have tried that. But for some reason i can't think of any kind of personal experience of mine to match my theory, which is that behaviors aren't mainly caused by learned responces to factors in life, and that the psychological process of one's own mind actually has domination over whether a responce is permanent or not. There's really no way to personalize that into an example which is my main problem.

awh..it would not be hard for you if you also based it to your own experiences.. Like you'd met any kind of people..

What about the psycological rendering of the human mind that learns to overcome, change and adapt to everyday changes and tramatic events of life that the cerebral cortex and the part that extends memory functions that allows one self to learn, use and alter the changes of the mind?

your topic's kinda broad.. Well, my last term paper at high school was also about human's behavior but been specific "emotional people's behavior..

@missCHIE: We were just told to do our term papers over a person who enhanced the field we're majoring in, and then take their data and create a theory of our own. It is greatly broad and it kills me. However, i really need a good grade on it so i'll be allowed to transfer.

@Ayonowyn: brilliant lol but i cant change my paper now as i've already finsihed it and such. :/ i just need some sort of personal example to back my theory up instead of data and figures.

@Skittles19: okey what about use the internet and g o o g l e it? it might help you.. i suggest