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Go Ahead and Judge Me (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
7-Nov-12 2:48 am
You think that you know me?
You assume to know so much.
You’ve never even
Said Hello to me,
Yet you’ve condemned me
In your eyes.

I’m not saying I care,
Because I’ve judged you
Silently this whole time,
But who are you to say
That I’m not good enough?
Maybe this makes me a
Hypocrite,
But at least I admit to it.

I am not perfect,
Far from it,
But I am not something for you
To just look at
And dismiss
As nothing more,
Than a speck of dirt.

Go ahead,
Condemn me.
I dare you.
Because I will prove you wrong.

Don’t try and put me,
In a box.
I don’t fit them.

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
7-Nov-12 2:50 am
As always Meg, you make me wanna put my pen down and bow to the master!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
7-Nov-12 2:55 am
@JLaDawn: nah don't do that... I'm not THAT good... or am I? :P but no, don't do that, yours are very good, their not liek mine, and good! be sad if everyone wrote the same, we come from different places emotionally and style-ly. lol.

 

 

 
 
 braindroppings 
7-Nov-12 2:57 am
Great job!!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
7-Nov-12 3:00 am
@braindroppings: thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
7-Nov-12 3:01 am
Style-ly? Love it!!!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
7-Nov-12 3:05 am
@JLaDawn: well... sometimes ya just gotta make up the word ya need :P hahaha

 

 

 
 
 james85 
7-Nov-12 7:28 am
@mrb89: as always very good my friend :)

 

 

 
 
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