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Beautiful (by Gator8282)

 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
7-Nov-12 1:30 am
I dream of this girl with beautiful blue eyes like the ocean deep, Yet forbidden with beautiful soft satin skin. She has this soft bounce in her walk, long soft legs like a mountain high, the twinkle of the stars in her eyes. When she smiles it melts my heart. Her touch is soft and gentle, her hair flows like the trees in the wind. When I hold her I feel complete and time stops just for that special moment she is so beautiful!!!

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
7-Nov-12 1:34 am
@Gator8282: hey man, thats my sister! j/k lol

 

 

 
 
 cloud1WH 
7-Nov-12 1:43 am
@Gator8282: hey man, thats my sister! j/k lol

 

 

 
 
 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
7-Nov-12 1:44 am
@PaulG7719: lol

 

 

 
 
 JANUS8877 (0)   (47 / F-M / Georgia)
7-Nov-12 1:50 am
you should publish if you haven't done so already

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
7-Nov-12 1:51 am
That was good

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
7-Nov-12 2:06 am
Again....soooo sweet!

 

 

 
 
 bigmomma19 
7-Nov-12 2:09 am
Great job!

 

 

 
 
 braindroppings 
7-Nov-12 2:18 am
@gator8282: Hey man, thats my sister! J/k lol
hahahahahaha xd

 

 

 
 
 braindroppings 
7-Nov-12 2:19 am
This was really great!

 

 

 
 
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