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Ending Her Cries (by Gator8282)

 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
6-Nov-12 2:18 am
I looked into her eyes as I got lost in their depth a glance into the future revealing the secrets she kept. For so many years she could cared less, Yet we were both afraid to say. So we avoided each other completely everytime, simply another day... She cried to me one night please help I dont know what to do I wrapped my arms around her body, its okay now Im here with you she told me about her boyfriend he cheated and hurt her bad I told her not to worry, But in the inside I was getting mad I held back my anger and I comfort her instead playin with her hair, she laid still on my bed I leaned over to kiss her cheeks, she smiled and turned to me.. Thank you for being there I have finally learned, with that she drifted off. I left her quitely sleeping, how could anyone want to hurt her. I ran through thoughts my heart leaping I met up with her boyfriend, swung out of pure love and rage... A knife stabbed through my stomach, God where were you today, My head smacking onto the pavement, My breath getting thin... My vision blurred and fading slowly. This was a battle I could never win... As theses darkness consumes me lights fills my eyes... I am proud to have lost my life if it meant ending her cries!!!

 

 

 
 
 OFWGKTA (13)    (30 / F-M / Florida)
6-Nov-12 2:25 am
Wow. :( I can really relate to being cheated on & heartbroken. This is just wonderfully written and I think it's great people can connect with this . Keep up the good work!!

 

 

 
 
 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
6-Nov-12 2:33 am
@OFWGKTA: Thanx

 

 

 
 
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