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A Teardrop On The Rose (by Gator8282)

 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
6-Nov-12 12:29 am
A teardrop fell upon the rose that she held close to her chest, In sympathy the petals closed. As she saw her love at rest. The rose it seemed to feel her pain; As one by one her petals fell and upon the stem of thorns, now fell the pouring rain. Bending down she picked the petals and to herself she drew them near, She saw in the rose her broken heart, and on the petal her fallen tear. Between the pages of a book, She placed the petals tenderly and the rose it shed a tear. As if it cried in sympathy... The words on the pages read forever my love, remember me, and when you see a rose of red... Remember love to remember me!!!

 

 

 
 
 Lonelycountrygirl 
6-Nov-12 12:51 am
wow i like that!!!!

 

 

 
 
 JANUS8877 (0)   (47 / F-M / Georgia)
6-Nov-12 1:08 am
thet was so beautiful i was tearing up

 

 

 
 
 JANUS8877 (0)   (47 / F-M / Georgia)
6-Nov-12 1:09 am
that was so beautiful i was tearing up

 

 

 
 
 OFWGKTA (13)    (30 / F-M / Florida)
6-Nov-12 1:16 am
so sweet! amazing. well done

 

 

 
 
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