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After Life (by Gator8282)

 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
5-Nov-12 6:36 pm
I see your face yet its fading. I hear your voice when only Im asleep. In dreams will I ever get the chance to say I miss you, now your gone to that place I cant yet reach. Tell me there's a after life. Tell me you will be there when I need the advise and guidance from the one whom really cared. Are you happy? wherd you are. Do you watch us from the stars? Are you saddened when we cry? Do you still sing that soft lullaby? Its been years since we saw your face, I promise I wont forget you and I wont let you fade, Yet... I will remember the laughter and keep them with me, Because one day I will see you and hear you.. In the world after this!!!

 

 

 
 
 yourladyoflove 
5-Nov-12 6:54 pm
@Gator8282: beautiful & touching...bittersweet :'( I loved ur poem. it made me cry bittersweet tears. thanx for sharing. i think evry1 can relate to this.

 

 

 
 
 rockyperkins (2)    (61 / M-F / Pennsylvania)
5-Nov-12 9:30 pm
remember this one day we will all one day be happy and safe in gods heavenly kingdom. The bible says that there will be no more tears, no more pain and no more sorrows. This life is some what of a test and a proving ground for all humanity. When i was 7 yrs old i had and enjoyed a brief out of body experience where i myself for a very brief time enjoyed all the bliss and the glory of gods heavenly kingdom. God and heaven and the bible are absolute truth. I saw what i saw and i know that where i was, was real. I cant prove what i saw is true, because this out of body experience was mine and mine alone. I really enjoyed reading your poem because it brings thoughts to me of my mother. I love you mom rest in peace honey

 

 

 
 
 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
5-Nov-12 9:41 pm
Thanx

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
5-Nov-12 9:45 pm
Wow...very very touching! Thanks for sharing this with us :))

 

 

 
 
 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
5-Nov-12 10:02 pm
No problem

 

 

 
 
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