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Rap for the fame or game (by Derekj83)

 Derekj83 
2-Nov-12 9:55 pm
im jus main stream, spittin bout real life, while u niggas day dream, im rappin bout wat feels rite, jus tryin to stay clean, while u tlkin bout smokin til u die, ***** u just day dream, if u smokd tht much u wouldnt even b alive, dis is how god md me, why rap somthin thts jus a lie, there is no pwers tht he gave me, only common sense tht hlps me survive, in a world full of emptyness, never thought this world would b so dry, yet im stil envious, to live every sec tht goes by

 

 

 
 
 ThatNerdyChick (32)    (30 / F-MF / Virginia)
2-Nov-12 9:56 pm
hmm... not bad lol though rap's definitely not my forte

 

 

 
 
 Derekj83 
2-Nov-12 9:59 pm
@ThatNerdyChick: haha thnx !!! ;)))))

 

 

 
 
 cloud1WH 
2-Nov-12 10:03 pm
Well I love it 8') that's because I love rap

 

 

 
 
 Derekj83 
2-Nov-12 10:11 pm
@cloud1WH: Hahaha thnx man!!!! ;)

 

 

 
 
 cloud1WH 
2-Nov-12 10:13 pm
@Derekj83: ;) wheres minnie girl at lol im surprise she didn't post yet :p

 

 

 
 
 LexieJordan 
2-Nov-12 10:23 pm
im jus main stream, spittin bout real life, while u niggas day dream, im rappin bout wat feels rite, jus tryin to stay clean, while u tlkin bout smokin til u die, ***** u just day dream, if u smokd tht much u wouldnt even b alive, dis is how god md me, why rap somthin thts jus a lie, there is no pwers tht he gave me, only common sense tht hlps me survive, in a world full of emptyness, never thought this world would b so dry, yet im stil envious, to live every sec tht goes by
Wow that's really good gorgeous :')

 

 

 
 
 missCHIE (27)    (30 / F-MF / Philippines)
2-Nov-12 10:37 pm
Ur good in rap huh .. :) not bad ! 2 thumbs up for that one ..

 

 

 
 
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