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I Lost Myself (by mrb89)

 Austinjordanvas 
25-Oct-12 2:37 pm
@mrb89: so don worry dere is a good load of happiness cumin ur way as we speak but de only thin is we dont kno wen it will reach u

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
25-Oct-12 2:40 pm
@Austinjordanvas: thank you.
this is poem is not about a bad time....
it's about the mental and emotional battles that can plague and haunt a person throughout their life, because of things that happened in their pasts.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
25-Oct-12 3:04 pm
@mrb89: great poem my friend :) i can relate very much so

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
25-Oct-12 3:09 pm
@james85: thank you my friend :)

 

 

 
 
 Twoinchheels (7)    (60 / F-M / Pennsylvania)
25-Oct-12 3:14 pm
Very nice

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
25-Oct-12 3:18 pm
@Twoinchheels: thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 vader287 
25-Oct-12 11:33 pm
the baladeer has returned again with a another good un

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
25-Oct-12 11:48 pm
Wonderful as usual mrb!!!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
26-Oct-12 12:59 am
@IrishLove1988: thank you...
had a lil spare time last night, so I did a lil writing.

 

 

 
 
 braindroppings 
26-Oct-12 8:12 pm
I really enjoy your poems and I relate to them a lot. You have a gift! Don't ever stop writing!

 

 

 
 
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