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True love (by mommyoftwo2008)

 mommyoftwo2008 (7)    (35 / F-M / Washington)
22-Oct-12 11:00 am
True love is like a dream. Like trying to walk on a broken beam. True love is something you cant find in space. But if you find it you cant replace. True love is a feeling. But not when a broken heart is healing. Open up your eyes and see. That one true love thats waiting to be.

 

 

 
 
 mommyoftwo2008 (7)    (35 / F-M / Washington)
22-Oct-12 11:01 am
Hope everyone likes it it came from my heart

 

 

 
 
 Mobifren (2)   (41 / F-MF / Philippines)
22-Oct-12 11:10 am
super nice i super like

 

 

 
 
 james85 
22-Oct-12 11:17 am
@mommyoftwo2008: great poem well done! :)

 

 

 
 
 PoshLove (1)  (33 / F-M / South Africa)
22-Oct-12 11:21 am
I love it!! 2nice

 

 

 
 
 Powerhauz (0)    (43 / M-F / Kenya)
22-Oct-12 11:51 am
@mommyoftwo2008: i just love this its an eye opener am putting the words in ma number song

 

 

 
 
 thedarkprince11 
22-Oct-12 12:17 pm
Beautiful. I hope you wrote that cause you have found someone to make you write that great poem :-)

 

 

 
 
 arvecena (2)    (31 / M-F / India)
22-Oct-12 12:23 pm
@mommyoftwo2008: true love as more strenght ah im also waitin for it

 

 

 
 
 mommyoftwo2008 (7)    (35 / F-M / Washington)
22-Oct-12 2:19 pm
thanks everyone no i havnt found that person yet but someday i will

 

 

 
 
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