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Shut Up and Listen (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
21-Oct-12 7:26 pm
Shut up and listen!
You go on and on-
Shut your trap!
Listen to that sound?
It's my heart shattering,
my tears falling,
and my last straw
breaking.

You keep walking by me-
Stop!
See me sitting here?
I'm right were you left me,
after you kicked me down.

Maybe when you finally look at me,
you'll see that hurt look in my eyes-
And I hope you'll realize
that you put it there.
You broke me.

 

 

 
 
 cutiepie101 
21-Oct-12 7:28 pm
That makes me cry :(

 

 

 
 
 james85 
21-Oct-12 7:31 pm
a very powerful and great poem my friend you are on a roll now lol

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
21-Oct-12 7:32 pm
@cutiepie101: awe don't cry!

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
21-Oct-12 7:32 pm
@james85: lol. I wrote this a few years back. found it hiding on my hard drive :P but thank ya

 

 

 
 
 Steve8145738611 
21-Oct-12 7:58 pm
@mrb89: wow that was wow my hat is off to u...

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
21-Oct-12 8:01 pm
@Steve[Warning: Posting of Contact Info is not allowed. Please follow the rules.]: thank you... if ya liked this one, ya should check out my others :)

 

 

 
 
 heikeva (69)   (60 / F-M / Bayern)
21-Oct-12 8:40 pm
@mrb89: Thanks.......so true, another good one! ;)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
21-Oct-12 8:45 pm
@heikeva: you're welcome and thanks :)

 

 

 
 
 vinnie612 
22-Oct-12 3:27 am
the baladeer has returned again with a another good un

 

 

 
 
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