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If Only (by LaDawn1974)

 LaDawn1974 
28-Apr-12 10:44 pm
If I could hold you for an eternity,
I'd want more,
If I could kiss you for forever,
It would be too short,
If I was going to lose my hearing,
Your heartbeat would be the last thing I would want to listen to,
If I were losing my sight,
Your eyes would be the last thing I would wanna see,
And if I could touch just one more man before I died,
I'd hold your hand...

 

 

 
 
 Elhefe (Banned)
28-Apr-12 10:53 pm
Wow the hits just keep coming do you have these written down somewhere if not you should

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
28-Apr-12 10:58 pm
@Elhefe: some of em...just my favorites

 

 

 
 
 Elhefe (Banned)
28-Apr-12 11:56 pm
Save them all the others might b your soulmate favorites

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
29-Apr-12 12:29 am
Beautiful :)

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
29-Apr-12 12:44 am
@IrishLove1988: thank u :o)

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
26-Jul-12 4:56 am
Here

 

 

 
 
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