All Forums >> General >> Stories, Poems & Creative Writing

Lets make a story (by chunkymonkey67)

 nikky1984 (6)    (40 / F-M / England)
16-Jul-13 12:17 am
She reached into her purse and pulled out a.....

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
16-Jul-13 12:50 am
A small piece of paper. As she unfolded it, she looked around, then up at the second story windows. Then looked all around again. Who & what was she looking for? Was she beinging followed? Why the second floor windows?

 

 

 
 
 IndianDreamer 
16-Jul-13 3:26 am
Suddenly she ran towards me-screaming my name and begging me to forgive her. Shots rang out from the second floor of the building she was checking out and the handsome driver was struck by a bullet- he fell to the ground yelling-Tell the truth! Stop covering up for them! ...

 

 



Last edited by IndianDreamer; 16-Jul-13 3:28 am.
 
 
 Zilya777 
16-Jul-13 3:36 am
I ran towards her, cluching my cell phone, as people began screaming They were gathering around the tall man, as he ly in the street in a puddle of his own blood....

 

 

 
 
 IndianDreamer 
16-Jul-13 3:44 am
My girlfriend screamed out- This is insane! Just read this letter and you will understand!...

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
16-Jul-13 4:03 am
She shoved the letter in my hand, tears streaming down her face, her vacant eyes looking back at me. I could see an unspoken horror in them. And her face showed thr strain of a woman who knew & had been thru too much. Within that moment of unspoken exchange, she was gone. She ran from me, my childhood friend, down the side street. And I stood there amist the chaos, alone & frighten...

 

 

 
 
 Ladybug1223 
16-Jul-13 9:31 am
As i held the letter in my hand thinking what was it bout this letter? That lives were lost over it! & That well dressed man. That car and her looking like a millionaire

 

 

 
 
 NzRacingQueen 
16-Jul-13 11:25 am
I found myself a seat having a coffee with the letter in my hand,and i think to myself should i read it now or wait till i get home? Still in a dazed state of mind because of what just happend in front of me

 

 



Last edited by NzRacingQueen; 16-Jul-13 11:26 am.
 
 
 Crady 
16-Jul-13 12:18 pm
As I open the door to enter my house, tears gradually to wet my shirt like water thrown on me accidentally. I felt thirsty but couldn't take in water, hungry but lost appetite as I read through the letter.

 

 



Last edited by Crady; 16-Jul-13 12:22 pm.
 
 
 Ladybug1223 
16-Jul-13 10:07 pm
It surprised me wasn't at all what i expected. Started out with still love you after all these years. Think i always will. Iv won alot of Money yhat upset a lot of bad people. & need your help to.....

 

 

 
 
Quick reply:

[Smilies]

RULES:
  • Be respectful at all times.
  • Be mature and act like an adult.
  • Respect different points of view.
  • Discuss ideas, not specific users.
  • Don't get personal.
  • No profanity.
  • No drama.
  • No thread hijacking.
  • No trolling.
  • No spamming.
  • No soliciting.
  • No duplicate posting.
  • No posting in the wrong section.
  • No posting of contact information.
  • Be welcoming to new users.
Repeated violations of the above will result in increasing temporary bans from the forum and an eventual permanent ban from the site. Basically, just be friendly and neighborly and all will be well.
Similar threads:
Top
Home
Give us feedback!

Login:

* Username:

* Password:

 Remember me


Forgot?